The first five pages of your book are so important. As aspiring authors, we are well aware of their significance. And we place so much time and emphasis on getting them right. While we probably have a fair idea of what to do and not do in our first five pages, here is a quick recap of things to keep in mind when looking at the start of your novel.
Important questions to ask yourself:
Does the first line engage your reader?
Is your main character properly introduced?
Has the POV and narration style been made clear to the reader?
Does your reader get a good feel for the world – i.e. have you set the status quo?
Have you established your main character’s deepest desire?
Is there an inciting incident?
The most important thing to avoid at the beginning of your novel:
The information dump.
Your reader is only starting to get to know your main character and within these pages, so you don’t want to overwhelm them with backstory or world building information so early on. Remember, you’ve got a minimum of 80,000 words to work with, you can take your time introducing the important background information.
In my recent social media adventures of IG and the Twitterverse, I’ve seen the recurring question:
How do I title my WIP?
Today, I’m going to walk you through how I title my works-in-progress!
While I admit I’m primarily a young adult or new adult fantasy author, I promise this technique will work across a variety of works, encompassing all target audiences and genres.
Make a list of:
Key Character Traits (~3 each)
Species or Races
Major Point(s) of Conflict
Key Themes (~3 each)
Major Items or Places
Overall Mood / Atmosphere
Emotions (~3 each)
Decide on your top 3-5 from the above list.
Explore definitions, synonyms and like terms for the choice words. Utilize your favorite search engine for quotations or turns of phrase utilizing these words. Play with them, mix & match, combine them at your leisure. Have fun!
Begin to narrow your list. (This is where your possible titles will form.)
Allow me to demonstrate!
Aurelia, the purple dragon shifter
Seru, the electrifying saint beast
Thalasia*, the blue siren
Major Point(s) of Conflict
The Great War (prior to the book)
The Magical Barrier Collapse
The Guiler Invasion
Prismatic crystals (Violet & Purple)
Saint Beast’s enchanted collar
The Golden Lyre (siren charm)
The Golden Drake (dragon coin)
The white sand beach (the site of the MC’s first encounter)
The bridge (point where Thalasia and guilers cross to Prisma Isle)
The central market (place of gathering for all species on land)
Overall Mood / Atmosphere
Even my initial version–which may sound a tad over simplified–gives us more than enough to work with. I’ve highlighted my choices above. Feel free to circle the ones you like and cross out the ones you don’t particularly care for or get good vibes from. There will be plenty of options, so don’t stress.
Upon analyzing the list, I’ve narrowed it down to a few choices I thought really encompassed the story as a whole. Now, I’m going to do a spot of research using a dictionary, thesaurus, and my preferred search engine.
I’ll note down a few relevant examples of what I compiled below for ease of viewing.
A powerful and protective stone
White sand beach
Again, my list might seem overly simplistic, but I’m well versed in this process, so don’t feel overwhelmed or underwhelmed if your list is a touch longer or shorter. Work with what you have!
Now, you play with the words and their meanings until you find an option, or a few, that you think suit your WIP. This go ‘round, my title jumped out at me as I was creating the list. That may or may not happen for you right away. Don’t get discouraged. You will find your title. Just be patient and continue working.
Once you have a handful of viable options, choose the one that you think works best and gives your story the proper spotlight in which to shine.
As you can see, I chose the title Rebel Tides. I, of course, ran this and a few other options past my co-author, Krys Fenner, since we wrote this new adult fantasy novel together. I recommend you do the same with your titles, whether you have co-authors or just a few trusted writer pals. Obtaining a second or third opinion always helps. (Depending on their knowledge and familiarity of your WIP, it may also be wise to include a detailed summary of your story.)
Easy, right? Or, at least easier than you initially thought.
This tried and true method of creating a title has worked for me for many years. It’s a method I turn to time and time again. I sincerely hope it helps you select your next title for your work-in-progress.
If it does, please, feel free to reach out and tell us about it! I love to hear from my fellow authors within the Writing Community.
A few closing explanations on why I chose Rebel Tides as the title of my new adult fantasy novel.
The initial story was intended to be a young adult novel, detailing the friendship formed between two rebellious heroines: a dragon shifter, Aurelia (my character) and Thalasia (Krys’ character), a siren. The two were set to adventure to a magical academy and discover themselves together in the process, making their share of mischief as they went.
Long story short, the collaboration changed hands–and publishers–before their story could be completed.
In the revived and revamped form, their story shifted from a preteen coming-of-age journey to an action-packed struggle of survival, where the disappearance of a magical barrier cues a series of destructive incidents across the island a majority of the characters call home. Thalasia is initially blamed by my protagonist, Aurelia, who finds herself at odds with the newcomer. My secondary character, the saint beast, Seru decided to cozy up to Thalasia, even if it meant betraying his species in the process.
Krys and I were beside ourselves at these dramatic and sudden changes demanded by our cast. But, we decided to roll with it and see where it went. In the end, Rebel Tides still fit our story–if for entirely different reasons.
Our characters first encounter one another by the beach. As time progresses, it becomes evident they must rebel against the societal norms of Prisma Isle and their species to come together in order to save the island from guiler invaders. You might say, they need to create a shift or change the tides from the way things have always been toward a new way. In Thalasia’s and Seru’s case, they even seek to challenge and change fate itself.
… I appreciate you taking the time to read my first-ever blog post for Dragon Soul Press. I hope you enjoyed reading and partaking in the fun exercise provided. I’ll see you next time.